Part2 your city library is closing for renovation for three monthds

Dear Sir, Thank you for

message

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the message

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about

library

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the library

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will be closed for three

month

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months

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.I am really disappointed to hear that because I spend my

favorite

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time in

this

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area. I think you will give some books to read

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, in

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addition

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addition,

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you will add some tables and chairs in

reading

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the reading

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area.

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would help book readers continue enjoying reading

book

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books

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during the closure Your faithfully, Mirzoxid

samandarabdusattarov16

Dec 2, 2025

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structure

Organize the letter into clear parts: opening, body with two ideas (disappointment and suggestions), and closing.

grammar

Use correct forms: 'Thank you for your message that the library will be closed' 'three months' 'Yours faithfully'.

grammar

Check spelling and punctuation: capital letters, commas, and full stops.

content

Be specific and polite: suggest practical options such as more online books or temporary reading spaces and give reasons.

tone

Clear purpose and formal tone in the letter.

content

Includes concrete ideas about what to do during the closure.

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

64 words

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