The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The line graph illustrates the
number
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of
tourists
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who visited a particular Caribbean
island
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over a seven-year
period
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, from 2010 to 2017.
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, the total
number
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of
visitors
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increased significantly throughout the
period
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. At the beginning,
tourists
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staying on the
island
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outnumbered those on cruise ships, but
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trend reversed towards the end. In 2010, the
island
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was visited by 1
million
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people, which was the lowest figure in the whole
period
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. Around 75% of these
tourists
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stayed on the
island
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,
while
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the remaining 25% chose cruise ships. In 2011,
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the total
number
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of
visitors
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rose slightly to around 1.2
million
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, the figure for those staying on the
island
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remained unchanged. The entire growth of approximately 0.2
million
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came from cruise-ship
visitors
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. Over the following years, the total
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of
tourists
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continued to rise, reaching a peak of 3.5
million
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in 2017. Despite a small decline in 2012, the
number
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of cruise-ship
visitors
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increased steadily and reached about 2
million
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by the end of the
period
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. Meanwhile,
tourists
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staying on the
island
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remained stable at around 1.5
million
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for three consecutive years before being overtaken by cruise-ship
visitors
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in 2016.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, island, period, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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