The given pie chart illustrates data on transport and car use in Edmonton and table explains people's reasons for using the car in city.

The pie chart gives information about the public transport and car use in Edmonton, and the table illustrates why people use

the

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car

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cars

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it is clear that

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the number of individuals who do activities with cars is much higher than the rest;

also

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, we can see that the citizens who take buses and taxis

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lower in percentage.

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, commuting to work

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the car is much more popular than the other

reasons

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modes of transportation

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date

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shown, cars are the

top

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most popular

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famous

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in the city,

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in

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many causes for consuming them

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and

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departing

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to work is number one, and business is number two

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45%,

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it decreased 40% for taking children to school, but unfortunately, it dropped to 15% for both shopping and leisure. It is noticeable that riding the light rail transit is more convenient and

easy

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for some, as for the bus and taxi, the two of them had ten

percent

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, implying that it is not the

preferable

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preferred

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way.