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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In the contemporary world, an ever-increasing number of people opt for e-
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instead
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 of hard copies.
Although
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this
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 trend entails some drawbacks, I contend that the benefits of it are more significant. One major drawback of
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 development is its vulnerability to digital piracy. With the development of software applications, new ways of plagiarism of the content
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 emerged.
As a result
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, the authors and digital libraries are losing their income,
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 the fact that many people might choose to pay less or even get them for free from different sources.
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, many
books
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 from the e-library named "O’Really" were extracted with a specific browser extension, which decreased their sales.
This
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 drawback notwithstanding, I believe the upsides are more considerable. The primary advantage of
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 tendency is that it decreases harm
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 the ecology:
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 to paper
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, digital ones do not require specific materials,
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 as wood, to be published.
As a result
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, the deforestation levels could be reduced. Another merit is that since they would be published online, more income could be obtained,
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 the low production and delivery costs; the price for the book would look more affordable to people.
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, it could reach a much wider audience as no physical boundaries are present.
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, many authors use stores like Amazon and sell their works all around the world. In conclusion, individuals prefer
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digital
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 more than traditional
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.
Although
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 there is a concern about digital piracy, my firm conviction is that the presented advantages outweigh it.

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task
Make your view clear in the first paragraph and restate it in the end. Give more full points with clear proof.
coherence
Link ideas with easy words so the plan flows from one idea to the next.
grammar
Fix grammar at times; use simple words. For example, say 'new ways to copy content have come' instead of 'new ways of plagiarism of the content are emerged'.
examples
Add a specific example or number to show how ebooks save trees or save cost.
idea
Clear view on the topic from the start.
example
Some points are supported by examples.
structure
Overall message is easy to understand.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • environmental impact
  • sustainability
  • interactive features
  • accessibility
  • vast library
  • promotions
  • deforestation
  • visual impairments
  • reading disabilities
  • burden
  • enhance
  • save money
  • reading experience
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