The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.

The bar graph illustrates the total

numbers

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number

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of cars per 1000 people in five European countries, compared to the European average, between 2005 and 2015.

Overall

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, the average number of

car

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cars

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owned reached its peak in 2015. A decent trend fluctuation is seen in the first two countries.

Initially

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, both

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country

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countries

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1 and 2 stood at a low 250 and 450

respectively

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, respectively

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before

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, before

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experiencing a slight rise in 2009 and fell back to

its

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their

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initial point

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the end of the period.

By contrast

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country

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4 did not undergo any significant change in numbers and

remain

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remained

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stagnated at approximately 650 throughout the years. As for

the

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apply

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country

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3, after starting at around 650, it was gradually declining to just below 600 in 2015.

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trend is

also

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apparent in

country

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5 in the first half of the observation, but it

then

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grow

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grew

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noticeably and recovered to just below 1000 in the

last

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year.

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Dec 24, 2025

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Vocabulary: Replace the words country with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "numbers of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

153 words

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Trend
Stability
Significant
Increase
Decrease
Average
Comparison
Fluctuations
Steady
Surge
Dip
Outperform
Lag behind
Demographic factors
Socio-economic factors
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