The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate 3 different amounts of electricity that were generated in 4 places around the world in the year 2008.

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, we can see that Sweden and India were the two countries that produced all sources of energy.

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the data given, India had the highest number of fossil

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, which was 82%; the percentage decreased to 56% for Vietnam and even more for Morocco and Sweden, which had 5% and 4%, respectively. As for nuclear power, it was manufactured the most by the Swedes, by 44%,

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created a proportion of 4%. As for the

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kind of power supply, hydropower, the chart shows that the Moroccans had a rate of 95%, and it got reduced by 43% for the Swedish, reaching 52%, and by 8% for the Vietnamese, approaching 44%, and it declined even more to 14% for the

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country, which was India.

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Electricity generation
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