The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.

The map depicts the present and predicted future Islip town centre.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there will be a considerable change in the map of
Islip
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the Islip
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town centre. The countryside
area
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will have a ring
road
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that will be helpful for transportation to people of the town,
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on the place of the main
road
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, a pedestrian path will be added. Looking at the maps in more detail, we can see that there are
shops
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located on the northern and southern sides of the main
road
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, which are essential for inhabitants to buy daily groceries. On the southwest part of the
shops
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, there is the school. The eastern side of the school, the housing
area
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and the park are located. In the future, the
shops
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near to countryside will be replaced with a bus station, a shopping centre, a car park and
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apply
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a new housing
area
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,
whereas
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the second
shops
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will remain the same, which is situated close to a pedestrian-only path. The main
road
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will be demolished to make way for a pedestrian path,
while
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a full ring
road
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will be made for mobility.The park will be reduced in size , and a new housing
area
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will be added next to it.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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