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living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problem and practical problem. to what extern do you agree or disagree with this statement.

There is no denying the fact that spending your life outside your
country
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 where you have to speak another
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language
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language,
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 can
make
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create
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 serious social
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issue
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issues
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 and practical
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problem
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problems
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.
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 it is a commonly held belief that speaking in
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a foreing
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foreing
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foreign
language
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 could lead to a lot of problems, there is
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 an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that it could cause
serious
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a serious
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issue
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 and
practical
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a practical
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problem
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. On one hand, when you speak in other languages,
this
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 can lead to many issues.
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, it could lead to serious
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 when you contact with other people.
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, if you have an injury that you do not know how to tell them
what is
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how
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your
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feeling
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are feeling
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,
this
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 could lead to
serious
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a serious
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issue
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In addition
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, when you want to work in
thire
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their
 country, you have to be aware
about
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 the rules.
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, when you are a doctor, you have to know all the rules for
this
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 foreign
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.
On the other hand
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, speaking in foreign
language
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 could lead to social
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issue
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issues
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. It is
also
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 possible to say that you may misunderstand the idea that
have
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 been given to you.
Moreover
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,
while
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 you are
talking
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talking,
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 you may express the idea
on
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in
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 the wrong way, which may cause a lot of problems to the listeners and make them
confuse
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, when you are talking in
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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, you need to be careful about your words. In conclusion, despite people having different views. On balance,
however
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, I believe that it is true that
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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 could cause serious
contact
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communication
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problem
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problems
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 and practical
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problem
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problems
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.

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task response
Make your view clear from the start and stay on topic.
coherence
Use clear paragraphs: intro, body, and a short conclusion.
coherence
Link ideas with simple words like also, and, but, however.
language
Check grammar and use easy, short sentences.
content
Give real examples that show your point.
structure
There is an attempt to set a view and give some examples.
content
The topic is shown in a simple form, and the reader can see the idea.
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