Some people believe that goverment is wasting money on the art and that this money could be better spent somewhere else. To what extent do you agree with this view.

Many think that capital used for
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is a
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of
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funds, and can be put to better use. I disagree with
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notion, as
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believe that
art
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is a huge part of a
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identity and can produce
higher
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economy.
Art
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is an ancient form of culture. It has claimed many sectors of human development, building unique identities for tribes in the past, and now for
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. There are many forms of
art
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, like dancing, combat skills, painting and many more. These are different for different regions.
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, Japanese Karate, Indian Bhatarnatyam or Korean K-pop. These activities have given a global recognition to these
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increasing their international value. We
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compete in various artistic events
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as, Judo and painting, internationally.
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, prospering
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can lead to an increase in the wealth of the place of
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origin.
Art
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has not only been used as a form of entertainment, but has
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been traded for money. First world
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, like
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United Kingdom and the
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United States of America, display their popular singers,
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, increasing their GDP by selling their shows and live performances.
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other
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like Japan and China
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make money from animations, which is yet another modern sector in artistry. In conclusion, fine arts and talent display
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are profitable sectors. They play a major role in the country's growth by giving it recognition around the
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world
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, if invested in considerably, it
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guarantees a hefty return. Artists are not only entertainers, but
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celebrities in today's age.

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content/structure
Make your view clear in the first line. Say 'I agree' and keep this view in all parts. Use short, plain sentences.
content
Give one or two strong reasons. Explain each with a simple example that links to money or value.
structure
Use small, clear sentences. Put one idea in each paragraph. Use easy links like and, but, also, for example to move ideas.
grammar
Check spell and cap. Use one form of 'nation's' and 'GDP' and avoid big mistakes with names.
idea
You show a clear view that art helps a country.
content
You use many real life examples about art in different lands.
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