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Writing Samples
Band 1

In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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people
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People
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 lately start
question
Wrong verb form
questioning
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 themselves about the place they are
actully
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actually
live
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living
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 in, unlike
people
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 from the past, they do not
conserve
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convince
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 themselves with the story that began and started from day 1 with the
house
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.
with
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With
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 the new generation
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, mulitple
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mulitple
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multiple
 ideas and
belilves
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beliefs
 were born with them,
for example
Linking Words
, to find
your
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the
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 perfect
house
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you
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, you
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 need to be aware
from
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of
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 the
people
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 who
were
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have
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 lived in
, in
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it, in
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 some
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situations
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situation
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situation,
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 that would be smart.
but
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But
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in
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on
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 the other
hand
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hand,
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 it would
be not
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not be
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 necessary
and
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apply
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over protected
and
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, and
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wasting
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waste
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time
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the time
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 of the
house
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 seller and your energy. 
Linking Words
overall
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Overall
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,
people
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 start to take sides
opinion
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apply
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on the
background
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basis
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 of the
houseseller
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house seller
, but to sum
uo
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up
 the whole idea think
people
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 who
interested
Verb problem
are interested
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to buy
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in buying
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 the
house
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they
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apply
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could ask the seller directly.

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task response
Your answer does not fully cover why people want to know the history of a house and how they can check it. Add two or three clear reasons and a short plan on how to research.
coherence
Use a simple plan: write an intro, then two or three body parts, then a short end. Each part has one idea and a clear link to the next.
coherence
Link ideas with easy words like first, also, but, for example to show how ideas go on.
grammar
Check spelling and grammar. Fix easy errors like 'actully' to 'actually', 'mulitple' to 'multiple'.
lexical
Keep words short and plain. Do not use hard long words. Use only common English words.
topic
The topic is clear and you start to talk about it.
content
You note that asking the seller directly can be a way to learn more.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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