You bought a large appliance for your home from your local store and upon delivery you discover something wrong with it. write a letter to the store in your letter give details of the purchase what wrong what you like to do for this

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to bring to your attention a matter of concern regarding the purchase made at your shop recently. Yesterday, I bought a Samsung refrigerator(Model:2024Dec) from your store, which is silver in colour and comes with a 2-year warranty. The freezer started malfunctioning immediately upon delivery. The screen often freezes, making it difficult to watch the temperature, and the lights are constantly on and off , even when the doors are open.

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problem was initiated when the delivery person by mistake dropped the appliance hard on the ground during unloading from the truck. Given these circumstances, I kindly request that you authorize immediate replacement of the damaged freezer or provide a full refund. As a loyal customer and the appliance is on warranty period, I believe

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is a reasonable request to alter

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dissatisfaction with the service and the inconvenience I have experienced. Thank you for your attention to

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matter. I look forward to a prompt response. Best regards, Ashutosh Parmar

rajputashutosh0009Wed Jan 01 2025

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph addresses only one main idea. Although the letter is coherent, sometimes multiple ideas are touched upon within the same paragraph.

Task Achievement

Provide additional details about the purchase, such as the price or specific date of purchase, to enhance clarity and completeness.

Task Achievement

The letter maintains a polite and formal tone, which is appropriate for the context and likely to elicit a positive response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a clear and logical structure, with an effective greeting and closing.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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You bought a large appliance for your home from your local store and upon delivery you discover something wrong with it. write a letter to the store in your letter give details of the purchase what wrong what you like to do for this

The Greeting

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out abour the history about house or building they live in. What are reason for this? how can people research it?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others view it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?