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The chart below shows the percentage of households with internet access in a certain country in 2014 and 2024. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The aim of
this
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 report is to discuss the
difference
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 in
internet
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access
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 in 2014 and 2024.
Overall
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, there is a big
difference
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 between 2014 and 2024. In 2014, the
country
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 in which most
people
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 had
access
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 to the
internet
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 was the Netherlands, with 95% of the
population
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 having
access
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. In Belgium, the least amount of
people
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 had
access
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 to the
internet
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which
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, which
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 was 62% of the
population
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. Compared to others, Lithuania had quite a low percentage of
people
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 with
access
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, it was around 68% of the
population
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.
However
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, in 2024, Norway became the
country
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 with the highest number of
people
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 with
internet
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access
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, at as much as 99% of the
population
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. Greece had the lowest percentage of
people
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, with 85% of the
country
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’s
population
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 having
access
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 to the
internet
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.
Internet
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access
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 in Lithuania increased to 93%.
In contrast
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, from 2014 to
2024
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2024,
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 in all of the
countries
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countries,
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 more
people
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 gained
access
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 to the
internet
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. In
2014
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2014,
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 there was a big
difference
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 between the
country
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 with the least amount of
people
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 having
access
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 and the
country
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 with the most, and in
2024
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2024,
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 that
difference
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 got a lot smaller.
Also
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, Lithuania
improved
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has improved
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 a lot and is no longer considered one of the lowest countries in terms of
internet
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access
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words difference, internet, access, country, people, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • percent
  • households
  • internet access
  • chart
  • data
  • figure
  • point
  • percentage points
  • increase
  • rise
  • growth
  • grow
  • climb
  • jump
  • rise sharply
  • steady
  • gradual
  • rapid
  • significant
  • notable
  • higher
  • lower
  • more
  • less
  • gap
  • difference
  • overall
  • in general
  • in 2014
  • in 2024
  • compared with
  • urban
  • rural
  • region
  • reason
  • effect
  • cause
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