The pie charts below show favorite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart presents data on
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social media channels, illustrating how proportions were distributed among
Facebook
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, Twitter, LinkedIn, Google, and
Pinterest
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in 2011, 2012, and 2013.
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,
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constituted the biggest share,
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pinterest
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Pinterest
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represented only a minor proportion during these years. A clear gap separated the major contributors from the smaller ones. In detail,
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made up more than half of the total at around 59% in 2011, which
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about 10% in the next year. Twitter was the next major application at around 21% and 23% in 2011 and 2012, respectively.
Pinterest
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and Google shared the same proportion at around 5% in 2011, which
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slightly increased to 6% and 10% respectively. Google faced
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increase, reaching 14% after 3 years.
Facebook
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lost its popularity over 3 years, decreasing to 38% from 59% in 2013. In 2013, LinkedIn and
Pinterest
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up
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about 5% and 3% and reached
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apply
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their maximum.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words facebook, pinterest with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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