the graph show the map of islip center. describe it

The maps illustrate changes that the Islip town centre is going to experience in the future.

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, the most essential changes are aimed at providing contemporary facilities for residents by building up them,

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already existing buildings will be either renovated or remain untouched. Regarding the new constructions

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that are going to be introduced for the residents of the downtown, the most significant one is the dual carriageway around the town.

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way will be divided into two via a pedestrian-only

road

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, above

this

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pedestrian

road

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, at the north-west inner corner of the carriageway, a bus station will be built.

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, the city will be provided with two new housing

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the north-east and southern parts , and a modern car park located at the north of Islip. The most eye-catching transformation planned by the authority for the urban centre is removing the main

road

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, which currently leads through the middle of the shops.

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, one of the two shopping streets ( on the north and south of the main

road

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) is anticipated to be relocated to the southern section in the future

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at the same time, the second will be transformed into a shopping centre.

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, public places,

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as a school, a park and a housing, will see no modernisations.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

213 words

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