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Writing Samples
Band 2

more and more countries have a problem with plastic waste. What problems does it cause? How can these problems be solved?

In recent years, there
are
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have been
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 more and more countries
have
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apply
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the
issue
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issues
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 with
plastic
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 waste. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss
about
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apply
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the causes of the problem and how individuals can
solved
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solve
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 it. First of all, the problem of
plastic
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 waste
have
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has
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singificiant
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significantly
 increased
through
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in
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 a lot of countries.
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 is because people like to use
container
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containers
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which
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made
by
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of
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plastic
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 and can not
reusable
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be reused
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.
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, lots of
restaurant
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restaurants
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 use
plastic
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container
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containers
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 for
take away
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take-away
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 because of the lower price.
This
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 kind of product offering benefits like
convenient
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 and
cheap
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 for the shop owner, but it
turn
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turns
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 out
serious
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to cause serious
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 environmental problems.
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, there are some methods which can help to solve the issue.
For instance
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, use reusable
container
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containers
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 and focus more on eco-friendly products.
This
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is mean
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means
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 that it is more supportive for people to bring their own meal box when
eat
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eating
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 out.
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,
government
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the government
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sholud
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should
 put more effort
on
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into
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 the regulations and
fined
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fine
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 the owner who doesn't follow the rules. In conclusion, the problem of
plastic
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 waste
have
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has
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 become
siginficiantly
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significantly
 increasing these days. But there are some actions which individuals can take to protect the area and solve the problems.

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task
To fix task, clearly name the cause of plastic waste and give two clear steps for people and for the government.
structure
Make a plan before you write. Start with a short intro that says what you will talk about, then two clear ideas in the body, and a brief end that restates.
grammar
Check grammar and the noun form. Use plural where needed (containers, ideas, problems). Use 'are' and 'is' in the right places.
content
The topic is set and you try to talk about causes and fixes.
structure
There is a plan with three parts (intro, body, conclusion).
Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic
  • waste
  • pollution
  • environment
  • sea
  • ocean
  • water
  • land
  • animals
  • fish
  • birds
  • wildlife
  • people
  • city
  • home
  • school
  • work
  • health
  • cost
  • money
  • plan
  • action
  • reduce
  • reuse
  • recycle
  • sort
  • bin
  • trash
  • garbage
  • landfill
  • burn
  • ban
  • tax
  • fee
  • law
  • policy
  • government
  • business
  • industry
  • design
  • alternative
  • biodegradable
  • awareness
  • education
  • community
  • cooperation
  • agreement
  • international
  • shared
  • solution
  • solve
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