The graph gives information about male and female gym memberships between 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This
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graph provides key information about the
number
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of gem
memberships
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among men and women in the
years
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between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that there is a fluctuation in the
number
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of
memberships
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over the
years
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. Despite
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, the
number
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of men's
memberships
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has remained higher over the
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,
whereas
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the
number
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of women's
memberships
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was lower, except for the
years
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between 1993 and 1997.
According to
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what is shown in the graph, in 1980, the
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of male
members
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in the gym exceeded 2000 people in comparison to approximately 1000 female
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. The
number
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of men's
memberships
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remarkably grew to 4000;
however
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, it dropped gradually to more than half in 2000. After that, the
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of
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started to increase sharply until it hit the peak with 5000
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in 2005,
then
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started to decline over the
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to
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until
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2010, as recorded. In terms of women's
memberships
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, the
number
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started to increase slightly from 1980 to 1995 with little fluctuation.
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, the highest
number
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of female
members
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was recorded in both 1995 and 2005, with more than 2500
memberships
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. After 2005, the
number
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of
memberships
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has been reduced over time, a trend
that is
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also
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observed in the
number
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of male
members
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, memberships, years, members with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • pronounced difference
  • converge
  • diverge
  • membership rate
  • significant growth
  • slump
  • dominant trend
  • predominantly
  • consistent pattern
  • noteworthy
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