Some experts beleive that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Hi Alex, I hope you are doing well. It was great catching up with you over the phone yesterday. You mentioned that you are undecided about which primary school to choose for your son. If I were you , I

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pick the one that offers foreign language classes from articles lately, and experts say that kids' brains are like sponges at that age. They pick up pronunciation and grammar much more naturally than we do as adults. Of course, some people worry it might be too much pressure for

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is all about games and fun activities. It will give him a huge head start before he gets to secondary school. Let me know what you decide! Give my best to the family. Best regards, Dilya

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Jan 16, 2026

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task response

This writing does not stay on one clear task. It talks about a different topic. A good essay answers the given task with a clear point of view.

planning

Split the text into clear parts. Start with your view, then give two small ideas to back it, and end with a short final line.

coherence cohesion

Make ideas into separate short paragraphs. Use words like First, Next, Then, Finally to help flow.

grammar

Use easy, correct grammar. Watch spellings and common errors.

tone

The tone is kind and polite.

content

The message tries to talk about learning language and school.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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