The table compares data for the world's large-scale and small-scale sea fishing industries.

The table depicts the comparison of the two scales of fishing.

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is large-scale by the ship, the second is small-scale with boats.

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, a tremendous number of workers worked in local boats, even though ship workers was slightly lower.

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, the ship industry profited more than the boat

one

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with, small-scale included vast numbers of people , and it was 20 times more than large-scale employees, 12

million

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and 500 thousand, respectively.

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, a larger scale caught 29

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fish in

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year. But

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the smaller

one

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beat a lower proportion, 24

million

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catch.

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small-scale fishers sell their fish directly to customers, large

one

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delivers to the industrial processing. On the

one

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hand, the expenditure is relatively higher than the boat. It accounts for 30000 to 300000, whilst 250-2500 for smaller. The annual amount of fuel is

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significantly high in terms of large-scale. 14-19

million

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and 1.5-1.8

million

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, respectively

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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