the diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity

The diagram illustrates that electricity is produced from one type of coal.

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it is clear that

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there are fewer than 10 steps of production, starting from mining the coal until it is received by the users. The first step to take is the mining process to get the raw materials. When the coal is taken, it is processed in the crusher to produce small particles. After being broken down into smaller pieces, it is transported using some trucks before being ready for conversion into electricity. At the manufacturer station, a process called gasification occurs. The coal is gasified into three types of materials, which are gas, cooler, and solid waste. Following that, the gas is ready for the next process and is moved to the power plant, where

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step is almost the

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. Heat waste is created from

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step.

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, it becomes electricity, which is distributed to houses and some industries.

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