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Band 2.5

The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans compare the
Porth
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Port
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 Harbour in 2000 and today’s condition.
Overall
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, there are a lot of changes in building and land use
for
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in
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certain
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a certain
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area
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. Nowadays, the
Porth
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Port
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 Harbour has extended the dock
area
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, so
,
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apply
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 it can afford more boats in each dock.
Additionally
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, the
area
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 of
public
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the public
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 beach still similar over time. On the
left hand
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left-hand
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 side, there is a place for fishing boats that have been moved and changed from the
area
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besides
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beside
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its
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it
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.
However
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, both for showers & toilets and
car
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the car
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 park remain the same, near the main road.
On
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In
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 the southern
area
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, Harbour adds new showers & toilets beside the car park.
Moreover
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,
in
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on
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left
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the left
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side
Add a comma
side,
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 there are so many
changing
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changes
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happen
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happening
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.
Firstly
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, the cafes & shops have been established beside
lifeboat
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the lifeboat
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area
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, at the corner of
land
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the land
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. Another road is
also
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 added, connecting the other road to the hotel,
while
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 the hotel
have
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has
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 been changed from
castle
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a castle
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, either. After that, the public beach
become
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became
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 the private beach,
owning
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owned
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 by the hotel.

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task response
Give a clear opening sentence that says what the plans show, and a closing line that sums up the changes. Stick to the facts from the plan.
coherence
content
You point to many changes in the plan, so you show a good idea.
structure
You note both new and kept parts, and you use time words.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harbour (or harbor)
  • docks
  • shipping lanes
  • warehouses
  • recreational areas
  • infrastructure
  • additions
  • removals
  • facilities
  • environmental sustainability
  • economic impact
  • local community
  • capacity
  • technological advancements
  • industrial shipping
  • recreational use
  • surrounding infrastructure
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