The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.thr

The graph illustrates the three proposed locations for building a leisure centre.
Overall
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, the three locations are situated on a green space, where A and B are located on the east side of the city, and C is located on
west
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the west
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side. Location A is southeast of the industrial factories, where the river passes by
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, and
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the main road
is crossing
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crosses
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, connecting it to location B.
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, B is situated in a residential area
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, which
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will make it easier for people to benefit from the new centre.
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, the main road
rounded
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circled
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around the area and faced the river.
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, the C location
which
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lies in the
west
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is less likely to be appealing for people as it
located
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is located
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in the woods without any road connecting it to the city.
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,
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this
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reason
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reason,
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citizens may enjoy it as it is far away from the air pollution caused by factories and city noise.

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