The map show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.

The maps provide key information about the changes that will be made in the office building in the future.

Overall

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, it is clear from the graphs that the grass area will be destroyed , and there will be an increase in the office area.

In addition

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, the current layout has more features and facilities,

whereas

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the future one has a more functional and symmetrical design.

According to

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what is shown, the current layout has two green

areas

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within its boundaries.

Moreover

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, it has a canteen and a kitchen in the north.On the opposite side, there are four small offices and an entrance beside the

last

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office. In terms of the future map, the grass

areas

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will be turned into meeting

areas

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and outdoor seating

areas

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.The entrance will be repositioned to the south centre.

In addition

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, the canteen and kitchen will be turned into offices , and they will be bigger.

While

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the store room will remain,the WC will be relocated to the corner.

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Jan 30, 2026

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

159 words

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