The maps show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The two pictures compare the changes in a resort named Templeton, over a period of 15 years, from 1990 to 2005.

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, it is clear from the graph that a lot of different types of buildings were built over a 15-year period.

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, streets, parking and railway stations remained at the same design in both years.

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what is shown, in 1990, there was a huge shortage in the services of daily living.

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, the railway did not cover the whole area, and only had a short way.

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, it is noticeable that there were many trees that were no longer visible after 15 years in the same place. In 2005, a big supermarket was built in the western part of the resort.

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, a school and a multi-floor hospital were designed and built.

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, a new factory and three large buildings were placed in front of the sea.

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, the railway became longer and redesigned to cover all areas.

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The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree?

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Nowadays, the most important task is the environmental protection of our planet for future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?