The bar chart shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.

The chart depicts the amount of 4 different types of
waste
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which were collected in the recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.
Overall
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,
paper
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rose dramatically with a few fluctuations,
while
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other sources declined over
years
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the years
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. The measure is given in million tons. In 2011, the
paper
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made 55,
while
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glass
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was much lower than
paper
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, representing 48.
On the other hand
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, tins and
garden
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wastes were approximately the same, 34 and 30, respectively
,
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.
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In 2012, there was a decrease in the amount of
waste
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. Starting with
paper
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,
paper
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had a plummet to 50, whilst
glass
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to 40, tins to 28 and
garden
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waste
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14
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to 14
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.
However
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, in the next years, except for
paper
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, all sorts of garbage rose significantly, and
paper
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decreased to 40.
Whereas
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garden
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waste
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increased drastically to 30 , and
glass
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made up roughly 50. But, tin
waste
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remained steady. By 2015, all leftovers accelerated significantly,
paper
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rose to 70,
glass
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and tin made up 50 and 40, respectively, and
garden
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, paper, glass, garden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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