The table and graph below give information on internet searches in the US between 2004 and 2010.

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The charts compare how many people used five different

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engines in the US between 2004 and 2010

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, during the period, the usage of engines

was incredibly

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increased

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significantly.

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In the research, Google was the dominant engine,

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the users for Yahoo decreased

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the years of

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. Google was the most used

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engine, it was used by 35% people at the beginning of the reasearch and it grew sharply to 65% in 2010.

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the research, the users for Yahoo decreased extremely from 33% to 20% in 2010 September. Microsoft was used 16% in November 2004 , and it

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some fluctuations during the period.

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of it, it was 14%. At the beginning of

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the search

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people

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who used Ask Jeeves was 10% , and by the

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their number

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fell to 3%. Regarding

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AOL, it had no change till 2009 August 10 and it had a small decrease, which was 2%.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

159 words

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