Some people believed that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they shouuld be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both viewes and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argue that doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they qualified,
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others believe they should be free to take jobs abroad for higher pay, safer workplaces, or better training. I support mobility, because forced retention rarely fixes why people leave. Still, when training is heavily subsidised, a time-limited obligation is reasonable. Supporters of compulsory local work focus on fairness and capacity. Professional training is expensive, and taxpayers often fund university places, teaching hospitals, and supervised placements. If graduates depart straight away, the public sector loses staff and its investment.
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is felt most in remote areas: when a district hospital cannot replace a junior doctor, clinic lines stretch, referrals pile up, and emergency cover becomes fragile.
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, losing engineers slows infrastructure projects and weakens safety oversight on sites and in procurement.
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, strict restrictions can backfire. Many professionals migrate because the job is hard to do well: hospitals may lack equipment and safe staffing,
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engineering roles may involve weak project governance, low pay, and limited mentoring. In field postings, morale drops quickly when targets stay high but resources do not, so compulsory placement feels like punishment rather than service. Bans
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encourage avoidance, with some students choosing overseas study from the start. Mobility can raise skills too: doctors can train in better-equipped hospitals and return,
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engineers bring back modern standards. Even those who stay overseas often support families through remittances and partnerships. In conclusion, compulsory service may plug urgent gaps, but it cannot replace reform. Professionals should be free to work abroad, backed by fair two-to-four-year bonds or repayment options and better local conditions.

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task response
Your view is clear from the start and you back it well. To be stronger, add a brief plan that shows more steps or rules for how mobility can work.
coherence
Use short, easy words to help flow. Link ideas with small words like and, but, also, then, first, next.
task response
You give both sides and show why you think mobility is good.
coherence
Examples about remote areas and bad work places help your point.
structure
The ending repeats your view well.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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