the graph below shows three types of sports that has mostly played between 1985 and 2005

The line chart illustrates how much 3 kinds of sports have been played from 1985 to 2005.
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, we can see that rugby and tennis had the highest
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most of the time,
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basketball and badminton had the lowest
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in all of the years shown.
According to
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the data given, rugby has been played by almost 250;
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, the
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decreased in the second
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, reaching almost 200, and it reached an exact 200 in 1995. In 2000, it declined to 150, and in 2005, it declined to 50, which was its lowest
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ever in that period. As for badminton,
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it had been positioned at 50 in all of the years.
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, for tennis, it began with 150; the figure
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decreased to around 180 in the second
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. And in the third
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, it rose to 200, but in 2000, it declined to 150, and in the final
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, it declined even more, reaching 50. As for basketball, it stayed almost in the position which was between 50 and 100.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • increase
  • rise
  • grow
  • go up
  • decrease
  • fall
  • drop
  • go down
  • peak
  • high
  • low
  • steady
  • stable
  • constant
  • change
  • vary
  • around
  • about
  • approximately
  • from
  • to
  • during
  • period
  • overall
  • in contrast
  • whereas
  • first
  • then
  • next
  • finally
  • however
  • despite
  • compared with
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