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The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE DIFFERENT SUM OF FILM PRODUCED BY FIVE COUNTRIES OVER a THREE-year, START FROM 2007 TO 2009
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 A REMAINED THE DOMINANT FILM PRODUCER THROUGHOUT THE PERIOD, DESPITE SAW DECLINE IN THE FINAL YEAR.
CONVERSELY
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 B WITNESSED SIGNIFICANT GROWTH. THE REMAINING COUNTRIES PRODUCED SIGNIFICANTLY FEWER MOVIES, WITH MOST SHOWING A GENERAL UPWARD TREND EXCEPT FOR
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 D STARTING FROM THE LEADING NATIONS,
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 A BEGAN WITH THE HIGHEST OUTPUT, PRODUCING ROUGHLY 88 MOVIES IN BOTH 2007 AND 2008. IN ANY CASE,
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 NUMBER DROPPED BY 10 IN 2009,
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 B SHOWED
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 UPWARD. STARTING AT 50 FILMS IN 2007, PRODUCTION ROSE SLIGHTLY IN THE FOLLOWING YEAR BEFORE JUMPING TO 70 IN 2009 TURNING THE MINOR PRODUCERS, OUTPUT GENERALLY REMAINED BELOW 20 FILMS OVER A THREE-YEAR PERIOD.
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 C SAW A GRADUALLY INCREASING NUMBER, WITH THE NUMBER DOUBLING FROM ROUGHLY 8 IN 2007 TO NEARLY 18 BY 2009.
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 E FOLLOWED A SIMILAR PATTERN, RISING STEADILY FROM AROUND 9 TO 12 MOVIES.
COUNTRY
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 D WAS THE EXCEPTION, ITS PRODUCTION FLUCTUATED, STARTING AT 15, PLUMMETING TO UNDER 10 IN 2008, AND RECOVERING SLIGHTLY TO APPROXIMATELY 12 IN THE FINAL YEAR

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Vocabulary: Replace the words country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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