The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

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1995 with its current layout.

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, there have been significant developments in recreational, entertainment and accommodational facilities,

although

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some parts of the village, houses and main roads have

remainded

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remained

unchanged. With regard to

the

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apply

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1995, there was a main

road

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from north to south, which linked to the second main

road

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south

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the south

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. Several houses were situated

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both

right

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the right

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and left

side

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of the first main

road

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to the north. A

farmerland

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farmland

was located in the

north east

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northeast

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linking

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linked

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with

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a forest park

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its downside.

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, in the south, there was a sea, and a lifting port located in there .

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, the second main

road

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was surrounded

with

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several fish markets and shops: the former

situaded

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situated

down side

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and the latter located up side. Turning to the present development,

farmerland

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Farmerland

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has been demolished to build the golf land, and

forest park

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Forest Park

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has been removed to construct fennis connected to the golf land. Fish markets and shops have been demolished to build five

resturants

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restaurants

and four apartments,

respectivelly

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respectively

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, a car park has been built next to the hotel, and a minor

road

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has been connected

the

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first main

road

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

200 words

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Urban development
Infrastructure
Residential area
Commercial district
Public amenities
Greenery
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Expansion
Demolition
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Accessibility
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