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Writing Samples
Band 2

Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More individuals argue
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 reading
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 to develop their creativity and foreign language skills than visual activity. I personally agree with that opinion because
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books
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 provide
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the oportunity
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oportunity
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opportunity
 to animate
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things
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 by ourselves. In that
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 I want to mention
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apply
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different sides of reading
oportunities
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opportunities
.
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Regularly
 reading
somethig
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something
 gains us different
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 of
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positive
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abilities
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. We can use studying
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to
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 improve language
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 it
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 a native language or
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Additionally
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,
books
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 provide common words that are used in daily conversations.
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creat
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 an
oportunity
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opportunity
help to
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to help
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 us talk more fluently. Reviewing
books
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 regularly helps writing skills. Constantly studying
make
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 us more attentive and
eliminate
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eliminates
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disatraction
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distraction
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. Reading is
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an inevitable
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 source for developing. Recently, I listened to a podcast about
books
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 and how they profoundly shape our lives. Psychological research shows that reading
books
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 at a young age helps develop our imagination. That’s why, nowadays, parents prefer
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 to help grow and nurture their children. Because it
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explains
 in there easier and more understandable way.
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Furthermore
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situmilates
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stimulates
 to expand their thinking skills. In conclusion, I believe
books
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 help us improve more than
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 in several ways.
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 benefits are irreplaceable.

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planning
Start with a clear answer in one line. State if you agree or not and by how much.
structure
Make your essay have three parts: intro, main points with reasons, and a short conclusion.
content
Show both sides even if you agree. Briefly mention a view that reading may not be better for some.
language
Use simple linking words (and, also, but, so) to connect ideas.
language
Check spelling and grammar of key words (regularly, opportunity, imagination, development).
evidence
Give a clear example to back up a point.
content
Some good ideas about how reading can help with language.
structure
You try to link reading to imagination and talking.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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