You were invited to your friend’s birthday party, but you did not attend and did not inform them. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: apologise for not coming explain why you were absent suggest how you can make it up to them

Dear my best

freand

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friend

Azizbek, I am writing to sincerely apologise for not

went

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going to

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your birthday party. I am very sorry for

this

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situation. Unfortunately, I was at work on September 9th

and

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, and

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I worked until 11 p.m. The reason for

this

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was that I received a new project

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from

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Unigeo. It is my fault.

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However

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However,

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I sent you

gift

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a gift

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via Sardor. Choosing the gift was difficult

but

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, but

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I hope you liked it. I will make sure

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does not happen again. To make it

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up,

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I invite you to spend a day together having

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apply

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fun. I would like to meet with you next weekend if you have free time. I am going to go to

bar

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the bar

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in Chilanzar

and

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, and

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I will cover all expenses. I have free time on Sunday from 12

a.m

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p.m.

to midnight. I would be

greatiful

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grateful

if you agree to

spent

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spend

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your valuable time with me. Yours sincerely,

your

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Your

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bad

friend

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friend,

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Diyorbek.

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Feb 23, 2026

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structure

Make three short parts. One part for sorry, one for why you were away, one for how you will make it up.

language

Use correct spellings. Dear friend Azizbek, and end with Yours sincerely.

paragraphs

Put one idea in each part. Do not put many ideas in one part.

content

Say sorry clearly and give what you will do next time.

content

Give a clear plan with a date and time you can meet.

tone

Be kind and not blame others.

content

The letter says sorry and gives a reason.

content

It gives a plan to meet.

tone

It ends with a polite closing.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

157 words

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