The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graphs illustrate the number of
Japanese
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people going overseas from 1985 to 1995, and how Australia shares the market with
Japanese
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visitors.
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, in terms of
Japanese
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travelling to other countries, the
trend
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displayed a very significant increase over the period between 1985 and 1995.
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, Australia's tourist market shares signified a gradual rise from the beginning to the
last
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of the time period, 1985-1994. In 1985,
Japanese
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tourists visiting other countries were just nearly 50
million
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, but the number gradually climbed up and reached its significant rise in 1990, for about 11
million
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. The
trend
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had a little drop in the following year to just under 11
million
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before starting to go up again steadily and hitting the peak
at the end
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of the period, in 1995, for almost 16
million
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. Showing an identical
trend
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in Australia's tourist market share, in 1985, it started with merely 2
percent
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. The line depicted a steady uptrend in the following year to nearly double the number, just under 5.
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,
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there was a slight decrease in 1989, the
trend
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showed a slow increase
to
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the next 4 years, at just over 6, but it dropped slightly to exactly 6 in 1994.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese, trend, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • decade
  • fluctuation
  • consistent growth
  • market share
  • peak
  • period
  • significant
  • trend
  • indicate
  • tourism industry
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