You will be celebrating your son's 6 th birthday next week. you want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party.Write an invitation letter to this colleague.In your letter , invite your colleague to your son's birthday party,give details of the party and it's date and time , say how happy you and your family would be to have him/ her at the party.

Dear Serenity, I hope my letter finds you well, I would like to invite you and your family to my upcoming

son

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's birthday. My

son

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's name is Xenos and he is turning 6 years old

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year. Me and my husband

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planning to have a surprise party for him

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other family relatives. The date is on 12 of July, it will held in our house at 3:00 o'clock in the afternoon.

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, there will be a lot of fun games for other young children,

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good meal for everyone to enjoy. The party will not take long it will

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finish around 6:pm after all the games and blowing

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of candles

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. I will be delighted if you can come with your husband and your

son

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, I believe Xenos and Emmanuel can tag along. I am eagerly looking forward

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this

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day because I want to show my

son

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that he is special

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us, and I'm looking forward to

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you there. Yours sincerely, Kate

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Make sure to check the spelling of names and dates for accuracy.

coherence

Try to use clearer transitions between ideas to enhance flow.

coherence

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity.

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The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is suitable for an invitation.

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You included important details like the date, time, and activities planned for the party.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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