The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant .

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tables provide key information about the total
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of New York City between 1800 and 2000 and the changes in the
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of five districts of the city, which are Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, and Staten Island
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the same period. The units are measured in percentage.
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, it is clear from the table
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were the lowest
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population in New York
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was in 1800,
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the highest
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was in 2000.
According to
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what is shown in the table of all populations that were in New York, which started with 79,216 in 1800, which is the
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then
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increased
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substantially from 3,437,202 in 1900 to its peak of eight million in 2000. In terms of Manhattan, the highest
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was in 1800 with 76%, and substantially decreased to less than 20% in 2000.
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other districts started with 24% in 1800, they increased to 81% in 2000 in the
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "substantially" was used 2 times.
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