Space Exploration: Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while other thinks that it is essential for the human kind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

People argue that

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exploring the universe is a

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resources

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while

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many others believe space exploration to be important to understand the universe we live in.

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essay talks about both opinions on how the

resources

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are being wasted to discover outer space when

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could be used to

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major issues in today's reality. Exploring the outer space requires a hefty amount of money, time and research for something

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yet to be discovered. People would rather have these

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being spent on education, health, and other basic facilities,

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most people still lack in some societies, rather than spending

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them on

finding something unknown, wherein we would be unaware of any

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repercussions

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such

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discoveries.

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, if an alien planet

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found, we wouldn't know if that would be a positive or a negative outcome for our planet's existence.

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on the other hand

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, those

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could have been used to uplift an entire community's essential needs in poorer countries in Africa and South Asia. Discovering the universe is deemed to be of high importance

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only by researching and exploring

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would

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we find out what we are lacking. Only when

Thoman Edinson

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Thomas Edison

discovered and invented the light bulb, did we realise the importance of it, or when Graham Bell invented the telephone, did we know

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how essential it is. But prior to

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inventions, life was still being continued. These inventions

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did make life easier, but it wasn't something humans

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couldn't

live without.

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, I believe discoveries

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necessary, especially

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when they are being compared to other problems the world is facing, which are far more important. In conclusion, I believe that

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the undiscovered should stay unknown and the

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being spent in

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explorations could be diverted to things that are more important,

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cure

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diseases, improving poverty, facilitating everyone with basic human needs, etc.

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Answer both sides more fully. You talk more about why space study is bad, but the good side is short.

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Give a clear opinion in the introduction and keep it the same through the essay.

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Use examples that fit space study better. The light bulb and telephone are not very close to this topic.

coherence and cohesion

Make each main paragraph have one clear main idea and explain it more.

coherence and cohesion

Use linking words in a more natural way, for example: on the one hand, on the other hand, however, therefore.

coherence and cohesion

Check sentence order and grammar so your ideas are easier to follow.

coherence and cohesion

You have an introduction, two body parts, and a conclusion.

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Your opinion is clear in the end.

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You stay on the topic of space study through the essay.

Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

318 words

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Space Exploration: Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while other thinks that it is essential for the human kind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

some people think that students should take gap year to what extent do you agree?

The internet has become profoundly efficient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn. Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books. Do you agree or disagree?

Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students' sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.