The table below gives information on customer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The figure illustrates the
spendings
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spending
of Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and
Turkey
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on various items, which are food, drinks, tobacco, clothes, shoes, relaxing time and learning.
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,
Turkey
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spends the most amount of money on food and
edcuation
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education
compared to other countries.
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, Italy is the biggest consumer of Clothing. In
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detail, all of the countries choose the first three categories as the items they like to spend the most money on.
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and Ireland
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the highest of all
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the percentages 32.14% and 28.91% respectivly,
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Spain
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third with 18.80%, fourth is Italy spending 16.35%, and
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Sweden
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only 15.77% Clothes and shoes, the second two categories comes next in the level of spending.
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Italy
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the highest percentage of 9.00%
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the rest of the countries
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from 5.40% to 6.63%.
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, the
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these people like to consume are leisure and education, with
Turkey
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being the most
intrested
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interested
in that area, spending around 4.35%, and Spain being the least, only spending 1.98%.

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