You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

Dear Lan, I am writing

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letter to apologise for not attending your birthday party

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Saturday. It was my mistake to put the wrong day in my calendar for your birthday celebration.

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of setting it up on Saturday, I put it on Sunday. I just knew that the celebration was over when I saw your pictures on Facebook. I immediately checked my letter invitation again, but it was late. If I had checked my calendar carefully at that time,

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would not have missed your special day. It was a pity not to join your party. Let me treat you to the best coffee in town

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weekend. At that time, we can spend time together, have shoping and take a lot of photos in the local park.

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, I heard that you

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take part in the summer camping plan of our school, and I am in the same group as you.

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, let's have fun, and I will bring you a lot of snacks. Please accept my apologise and I am looking forward to seeing you again in our summer camping plan. See you soon, Hana

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Apr 5, 2026

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task response

Task response: You answer all parts of the task, but some ideas can be more clear and more full.

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Task response: Use the right word form: say 'apology' or 'apologies', not 'apologise' in 'Please accept my apologise'.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear start, middle, and end. To make it better, link ideas with simple words like 'so', 'because', and 'then'.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Check small word errors like 'shopping', 'I', and 'on our school summer camp' to make the writing easier to follow.

task response

Task response: You say sorry, explain why you missed the party, and say how you will make it up.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph has one main idea, so the letter is easy to follow.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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