The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This

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pie chart depict informations about where dose the government of

UAE

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the UAE

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spend the money in the year 2000.It is clear from the graph

the

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that the

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UAE give the money to more than 10 places

mostly

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, mostly

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no less than 9bilion witch is gos to the Transport.

According to

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what is

shown

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shown,

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there is a large amount

take it

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taken

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to the Health &

personal social services

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Personal Social Services

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with 53 AED

witch

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, witch

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it take the third place.

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comes the Social

security

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Security

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with 100 AED ,

also

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the Education come secoundly with 38 AED .

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Moreover

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with the same number 23 billion

spended

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spent

in other expenditure & Debt interest.

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hand

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we can see there is 22 AED for the Defence.

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, we could say the

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three places with less than 20 billion are the industry & agriculture , Housing

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, the

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heritage ,Environment ,

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lastly

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and lastly

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the Law order with 13 -15-17 billion in 2002.

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Apr 13, 2026

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

155 words

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