The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graphs demonstrate the changes
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in the possession of
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possessing a washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner and how many hours have been spent in houseworks (washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning)per week per household in a certain country from 1029 to 2019.
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, the rate for ownership of these electrical appliances showed an increase
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while
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, while
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the time spent on chores experienced a dramatic decline in the given
period
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. To start with
the
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, the
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refrigerator, it was the least used appliance at the beginning of the
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.
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, it showed a significant growth from 0% in 1920 to 90% in 1960
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in 1980 it reached 100%
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was continued
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until
the end of the
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. As for the vacuum cleaner, it started at 30% in 1920 and increased gradually
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until
reaching 100% in the
period
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given. Regarding the washing machine, it was at the highest level in 1920 with 40% and rised at 70% till 1960. In 1980, it decreased to 60% before growing to about 75% in the
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year. In terms of the time spent in houseworks, 50 hours
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were spent
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on these chores in 1920
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it declined
dramtically
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dramatically
over the years. By 2019, it dropped to around 11 hours.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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