The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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gives
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details
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number
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of questions delivered to the information office by tourists during January and June
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2011.
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, the
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shows that the number of
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investigations
received by telephone call and by attending
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the office personally increased gradually over the six months.
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the written inquiry decreased in the
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three months. In January 2011,nearly 900 call answered. In February, there was a slight drop followed by an increase in March to
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one thousand. After that, it remains
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stable
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for one
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. After April until the end of the period, it showed a gradual rise until 1400 calls on june.
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, the
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of people
came
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who came
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to the centre
expanded
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increased
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steeply,
month
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after
month
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, to
achieve
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around 1900, which was the highest number on the
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. Focusing on sended request, fewer than 800 email receaved on first
month
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.
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there was a noticeable fluctuation between February and March, folowed with dramatic decrease to the lowest value in the
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below 400.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, month with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • in person
  • by letter/email
  • by telephone
  • general trend
  • six-month period
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • decline
  • peak
  • fluctuations
  • monthly data
  • comparison
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