Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable not to be shared freely Discuss both these view points and give your own opinion.

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Some people advocate that it is a good idea to publish the
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publicly,
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I strongly suggest restricting the information from spreading widely.
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essay will examine both the viewpoints and elaborate on the conclusion
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. On the one hand, it is indeed true that sharing important findings will benefit other institutions and would be a great idea of universal collaboration.
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practice will increase efficiency and reduce costs.
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, it is widely observed that many organisations are working on the same kind of project, which result to drain of wealth and brain.
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, we need to establish a formal bridge between the institutions which will ensure the accessibility of findings.
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, some researches are so sensitive that it should not be shared publicly.
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would cause detrimental effects on humankind.
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, nuclear enrichment and ballistic missiles, if the organisations were to publish these researches, it might be exploited by enemy nations and terrorists.
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, we need to censor all
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primarily important. In a nutshell, independent bodies should be established to regulate
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and divide it into categories, ranging from safe-to-share information to classified material.
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, some types of
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as food-related studies, should be made public so that ordinary people can benefit from them.

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Answer both sides more fully. You give both views, but the first side is a bit short.
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Make your own opinion very clear in the end and also in the middle. Now it is clear, but it could be stronger.
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Add one more clear example for the side that supports sharing information.
coherence and cohesion
Link some ideas more smoothly. A few lines feel a little sudden.
coherence and cohesion
Check sentence connection and word form, for example 'result to drain' should be more natural.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear topic sentences in each body part, then explain each point step by step.
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You discuss both views and give your own opinion.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has a clear start, body, and end.
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You use examples like nuclear research and food studies to support ideas.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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