The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Write the essay in 150 words.

These two maps

ilustrates

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illustrate

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the differences between 1986 and the present in the town of Stockford.

Overall

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,

it is clear that

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the farmland was removed,

while

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the number of houses had

increase

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increased

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in

this

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city.

In addition

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, the bridge on the River Stoke is still there. Looking at the east of the main road, there were many changes happend. The farmland in the north-east was removed and replaced with a housing region,

while

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the school

on

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to

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its west became wider.

A half

Correct determiner usage

Half

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of the garden with a large house inside it was

cutted

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cut

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off

and

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, and

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the other half was converted to a retirement home.

For

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To

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the west of the road, there was

also

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another farmland converted to a residential area. In the north-east of the river, there were two shopping centres and a post office

,

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;

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the post office has

remaind

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remained

in its location,

whereas

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the shops

are

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have been

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removed.

Finally

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, the bridge on the north has not changed.