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The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart illustrates the number of tourist visits from all around the world in five countries from 1995 to 2010. The countries include
Brazil
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,
Egypt
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, Malaysia, France, and the USA, and arrivals are measured in millions.
Overall
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, the most touristic country was the USA,
while
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Brazil
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 was the least visited over the given period. Each country saw a rise between 195 and 2010; the tourists' interests in France increased sharply,
whereas
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 the figures for
Egypt
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 and
Brazil
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 experienced a negligible increase. In more detail, the number of tourist arrivals in the USA increased slightly from 70
million
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 in 1995 to over 80
million
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 in 2010. France was visited by 32
million
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 people in 1995, seeing a sharp rise to over 80
million
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 by 2010. 20
million
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 visitors
traveled
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 to Malaysia, witnessing a gradual increase until 2005 and rising significantly to around 43
million
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 in 2010. Regarding the remaining countries, the tourist visits in
Egypt
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 were a little fewer that of
Brazil
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 in 1995: the former being almost 8
million
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, and the latter being 9
million
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 subjects.
Egypt
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 and
Brazil
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 saw a gradual rise, reaching near 15
million
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 and 18
million
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 visitors, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brazil, egypt, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tourist arrivals
  • increase
  • rise
  • fall
  • highest
  • lowest
  • slightly
  • sharply
  • remain stable
  • in contrast
  • while
  • overall
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