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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.

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This
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These
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 three
pie
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 charts
illustrates
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illustrate
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 information about how
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dengerous
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dangerous
waste
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 products are dealt with in three countries. It includes a percentage for recycling, chemical treatment, underground, dumping at sea and
incineration
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. These
pie
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 charts show
dengerous
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 of
waste
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product
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products
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in
United
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the United
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kingdom
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Kingdom
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,
republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea and
Sweden
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. As you can see in
this
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pie
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 chart. In United
kingdom
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, the underground percentage increased by 82% ,
while
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 chemcial treatment and dumping at sea was remained steady by 8%, The
incineration
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 dropped by 2%. The underground was higher than the
incineration
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 in wasting products. The next
pie
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 chart
show
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shows
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 the
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dengerous
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dangerous
waste
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 products in
Sweden
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,there was less product than
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in the United
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kingdom
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Kingdom
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. the underground in
Sweden
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 was declined by 55%., the recycling was decreased by 25%.
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, the destroy wasted by fire grew by 20%. The
incineration
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 was less than the underground in
Sweden
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.
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, Korea and
Sweden
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was
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were
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 similar to each other.
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, there is different to in percentage in their items. The recycling was went up to 69,beside that destroy
waste
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 by fire falled by 9%, the underground was rose by 22%. There is changes in
this
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 chart ,the recycling become higger than underground. In sum, those
pie
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 charts explained clearly the
waste
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 product
dengerous
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. The highest one of dengerious on the United
kingdom
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 was underground with 85%. The lowest was in
Sweden
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 and republic of Korea because the rcycling was increased by 69% and 25%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, dengerous, waste, incineration, kingdom, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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