The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

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both
radio
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and
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audiences
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over 4 years old throughout one day between October and December
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1992 in
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the UK
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.
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,
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peak hour of the
audiences
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for both
radio
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and
television
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is differed
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noticeably, the one
of
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for
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radio
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is in the morning
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while
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, while
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the
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it is at night for
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television
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with
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a larger proportion than
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for radio's
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radio's
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radio
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. In terms of the
audiences
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of
radio
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, it kept increasing from the bottom at 2:00 in the
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morning
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its peak at around 8:00 AM with nearly 30% in six hours,
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dropped down slowly with successive fluctuations.
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, for
television
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audiences
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, starting at almost the same position
of bottom
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as
radio
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, it took 16 hours to reach its peak around 45% at 8:00 PM, with two slight rising happened at 8:00 in the morning and 1:00 in the noon. It
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experienced a dramatic decline.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words radio, television, audiences with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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