The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.

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The table compares the average
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of a restaurant's three different branches in Vancouver in 2016. Regarding the
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of
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, the
Georgia
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Street
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branch recorded the highest figure at 854
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, followed by
Dunsmuir
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Street
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with 750,
while
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Drake
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Street
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had the lowest
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at only 390.
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,
Georgia
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Street
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also
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had the highest transaction value at $10.69.
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,
Dunsmuir
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Street
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recorded the lowest value at $5.61,
whereas
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Drake
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Street
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stood at $9.02. Simultaneously, in terms of eating-in and take-away
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, all three branches experienced slightly higher numbers of take-away orders than eat-in customers.
Georgia
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Street
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still remained the branch with the highest
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of
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, with 405 eat-in and 449 take-away.
Dunsmuir
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Street
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recorded 358 in-store
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and 392 take-out
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, respectively. Meanwhile,
Drake
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street
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Street
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had the lowest
number
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at 200 on-site dining and 190 orders for takeaway. As the most popular item, Chicken Burger was the best-selling dish in
Georgia
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Street
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,
while
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Chicken Wings and Chicken Pasta were the most preferred items in
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Street
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and
Drake
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Street
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respectively
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, transactions, georgia, street, dunsmuir, drake with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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