The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the way
of
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instant noodles are manufactured.
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, the process consists of several stages
it
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beginning with
flour
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trucks that
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contribute
the
flour
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to storage silos . In the middle of the
process
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process,
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the mixed
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substance
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substances
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are delivered to two
dough
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doughs
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that have different functions. In the end, the cups are
lebeled
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labelled
by the machines. First of all,
initially
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, the storage silos
are absorbed
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the
flour
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from
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flour
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trucks.
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secondly
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,
sunstance
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substances
are entered
the
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mixer, water and oil are added to the mixer
,
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Then
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,
mixed
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the mixed
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substance
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is rolled by
roller
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a roller
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to have
one
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a uniform
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shape
,
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. Thirdly
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thirdly
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, the fixed
substance
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is sheeted
by
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first dough sheets.
Next,
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substance
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the substance
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is stripped by dough strips.
Folloing
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Following
this
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, the noodles are
shped
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shaped
by noodle discs.
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this
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, the noodles are cooked and dried with oil.
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, the outcome cups are
falvoured
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flavoured
with vegetables and spices. In the end, the cups are labelled and sealed by
labels
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machines.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words flour, substance with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufactured
  • ingredients
  • dough
  • rolled out
  • thin strips
  • steaming process
  • partially cooked
  • fried
  • dehydrating
  • packaged
  • distribution
  • quality control
  • standards
  • flavoring powder
  • sauce packet
  • traditional pasta
  • dehydration
  • instant cooking
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