Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environment projects in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: • Describe a local environmental issue that affects you • Explain what you would like to do to help • Suggest how the problem could be avoided in future.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
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letter to offer my help for environment project mentioned in your advertisement. One environmental issue in my area is the large amount of rubbish in the rivers and parks. People usually throw plastic bags, bottles, disposable utensils
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as take - away boxes or chopsticks, which make the climate dirty and the population.
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problem affects me because
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usually visit these places with my family. I would like to help by joining clean - up activities on the weekend. I will collect the plastic rubbish, recycle waste and encourage local people to protect the environment.
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,
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willing to participate in
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protection awareness campaign. To avoid these problems in the future,
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think the local authorities should provide more rubbish bins in public areas and organise educational programs about environmental protection.
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, there should be fines for those who litter. I look forward to hearing from you Your sincerely, Soạn

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task response
Task response: You answer all parts, but add one or two more clear details for each point.
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Task response: Use more exact words. For example, say the river and parks look dirty, not the climate dirty.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear order, but some linking is basic. Use words like also, because, and so more carefully.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Check small form errors in the opening and closing, and keep each sentence smooth and clear.
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Task response: You cover the problem, your help, and ways to stop it in future.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Your ideas are put into clear paragraphs.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • rubbish
  • litter
  • dirty
  • clean-up
  • recycling
  • bins
  • local area
  • bad smell
  • protect nature
  • community
  • volunteer
  • river bank
  • public park
  • waste
  • environment
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