The maps below show changes in the map of a park since 1980.

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The diagrams show how a
park
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has developed since 1980
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, the
park
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has undergone a number of dramatic changes. The most notable developments are the construction of a playground and a recreational
area
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with chairs, desks, and barbecue facilities,
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some natural features,
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as the trees and
flower
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garden
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, have been removed and replaced. In 1980, the western side of the
park
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contained a pond surrounded by two benches. To the sound of
this
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area
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was a
flower
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garden
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,
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two
gate
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gates
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provided access to the
park
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. At present, the pond and bench remain unchanged.
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, the
flower
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garden
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has been replaced by a bush
area
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, the original paths and gates
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been removed to make way for a central road running through the
park
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. The eastern part of the
park
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experienced more substantial changes. In 1980, there was a
flower
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garden
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in the south-east and
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a grove
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of trees in the north-east. These natural features have disappeared over time. Specifically, the
flower
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garden
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has been redeveloped into a playground,
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the trees have been cleared for a recreational
area
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equipped with chairs, a desk, and barbecue facilities.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, area, flower, garden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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