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The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.

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The two maps compare
between the
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Nelson
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city
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 both in 2000 and
present
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the present
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the town has significantly
develpmented
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developed
 from
in
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2000 to now.
This
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city
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 has added
by a
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numerous convenience
faciilities
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facilities
such
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 as
bike
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a bike
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 rental scheme,
hall
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a hall
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 of residence,
shopping
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a shopping
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center
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centre
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,
restaurant
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a restaurant
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, and bars and clubs,
while
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 the port,
univercity
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university
, and
city
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center
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 has been still remained. Looking at the maps
more
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 detail, the northern side of
this
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city
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 have changes a lot. The old train station in 2000 has demolished and newly constructed between the
city
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center
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centre
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 and univercity with
trainline
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a trainline
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, connecting both
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city
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the city
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center
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centre
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 and the little station asides of the university. A hall of residence and a new shopping
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center
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centre
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 have been sutructured to the
northernwest
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northwestern
 and
northerneast
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northeastern
 sides
to
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of
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this
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city
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respectively
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, respectively
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.
Moreover
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, not only
the old market has
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has the old market been
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 replaced by a new shop
but
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, but
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also
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new
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a new
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 covered market has been built
at
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on
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 the east side of
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city
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the city
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center
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centre
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. In present, a restaurant and many bars and clubs
has
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have
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 been added between the port and the traffic road
which
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, which
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 has
converted
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been converted
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 in to pedestrian-only way
in
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now.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, center with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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